Well I took today to try and rest up, and I ended up writing my latest target in ages. Oops. I’m ok with that, as I don’t exactly have to be up early any time. I’m just, I dunno worried I guess about target slipping again. But I’m feeling more chill about HOF now. I guess it’s because I get to put it down soon, and I always had a clearer view of the ending of this story. That might even be part of the problem with the story, that I tried to railroad for a certain ending too much. I think the bigger problem is I kept leaving loose threads where I went ‘hey let’s hint at this’, and then I’d get to the payoff and be ‘eh’ about the idea by then.
This is what rewrites are for.